Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Final Paper

Incivility in the Online World…
            The advancement of the Internet and the World Wide Web without a doubt has dramatically changed the world that we all live in. It not inaccurate to say that with great technology comes greater risks and side effects. One of these effects includes cyber bullying and a growing incivility crisis.  Civility is a term that is coined to mean formal politeness or courtesy, and this can be applied in both behavior and speech.  Despite the fact that civility should be an inevitable manner that is taken on by everyone, it can be seen more and more that civility among people is becoming more and more of a rarity. People make connections through many different social medias, the Internet, and cell phones constantly. The Internet is a young technological invention, but is the most rapid growing and the most obsessive addiction of this generation; I say this from experience myself. The ideas of blogging, posting, and sharing thoughts on the worldwide web, have caused threats to arise in the forms of trolling, cyber-bullying, and hate comments. Due to the fact that the Internet seems to easily allow anonymity, it is found everywhere. Thus resulted in “trollers” and “bullies” hiding behind a screen and feeling absolutely no remorse for their actions. Deception and manipulation push trolls and bullies to continue what they are doing because they cannot be caught. This causes an issue of concern for the public in regards to political incivility, and if nothing is done to debunk the problem it will continue to creep into the center of our discourse. Ultimately if this issue is not addressed additional consequences can arise and affect the public in other various ways.  In order to propose a solution to the question of how the trolling and cyber-bullying phenomenon can be lessened to a degree, or even stopped completely; several approaches have been brought to light.  Taking pieces from each solution can contribute to a new approach to the situation all together. In this paper, the many solutions to political incivility and anonymity in the world today will be analyzed through many different pieces of work including videos, news articles, and journals while additionally looking at the strengths and weaknesses that may occur in all. I will also discuss and explain my main claims regarding the problem with the support of different pieces of evidence.
            There is no question that this issue of incivility and anonymity has become one of the biggest debates among people in the 21st century. As stated above, through thorough research on incivility in the online world I have been able to pick up on many different possible solutions to these problems. Andrew Stafford, a Brisbane-based author and Age contributor, argues for the heavy restriction of anonymity in online forums, rather than ridding of it completely. He states in his article, that he would “request genuine transparency of identity” to start. He claims that this may “help to elevate the tone of how we speak to each other, and provide at least some protection from an army of baiters, haters, and spivs”.  Stafford argues that, “people indulge in their worst tendencies” when anonymity is in the equation. Yet Stafford also addresses that anonymity isn’t something that can go away completely. Anonymity is essential to the protection of people as well, in looking at both sides of the coin; Stafford is able to draw a conclusion that can satisfy several needs. He finds a specific middle ground between restriction and banning of anonymity.
In a different article, The Price of Incivility by Christine Porath and Christine Pearson, it is made obvious that the price of incivility has risen to astonishing numbers, for example Pearson and Porath report “98% [of workers] have reported experiencing uncivil behavior in the workplace” (Pearson & Porath). Additionally it was also pointed out that “12% [of people] have left their jobs due to uncivil treatment”, “80% [of people have] lost work time worrying about the incident”, and “63% [of people] lost work time avoiding the offender” (Pearson & Porath). From these numbers it is apparent that incivility comes in various forms, yet can have lasting effects. Continuing on this idea, Kathy Sierra attempts to explain the phenomenon in elementary terms. Kathy Sierra, a victim of an online troller, utilized the analogy of Kool-Aid to describe what it is truly like to be “trolled”. She states that as a victim you are considered the “Kool-aid server” who has people “take Kool-aid” (as in retweet, favorite, expand upon) for social debate (Sierra). However when everyone is “taking your Kool-aid” trollers are slowing losing audiences to you [the victim] and this causes the troller to get angered that their targeted audience likes your “Kool-aid” rather than theirs [the trollers]. (Sierra) Thus essentially turning the situation into a popularity debate amongst everyone. In the most basic terms, trollers want to be popular too; maybe not in the same ways as a victim may but they will do anything for power, even if that means harassment towards an individual whom they do not know nor may ever know.
            Either way that the situation goes, trollers are on the hunt for anyone to prey upon. To elaborate more on what others have stated, I would like to discuss Roberts Miller’s paper yet again. Although never providing a solution to the issue, Roberts Miller argues how society
should be acting. She presents a sort of utopia in her argument, and what aspects would make up an ideal world with minimal incivility. Patricia Roberts Miller is a rhetoric-writing professor at the University of California, Berkeley, a very prestigious and a well-educated woman to say the least. Roberts Miller focuses on the idea of Demagoguery throughout her article, and outlines individual elements regarding the “rules of discourse” in today’s society (Roberts Miller, 462). Essentially she claims that audiences become strictly separated into in-groups and out-groups, and thus hurting the goal of debate. Although never specifically presenting a full solution to the problem known as incivility, Roberts Miller sets the guidelines that should be followed in order to avoid this problem. As well as points to the consequences that could occur due to incivility, and anonymity. Ultimately not giving a answer to the audience as to go about fixing this issue of incivility in the online world, is the biggest weakness in Robert’s Millers paper however her strength lies in the ability to motivate the audience to move towards a better future.
            After thorough research on this controversy, I find that my claims most closely follow the ideas of Andrew Stafford. I agree with this claim to the point that I have found further studies to support his position, and even further extend the stance Stafford takes in the overall argument. Yet, despite being in large agreement with Stafford, I also believe that Stafford fails to take in the full extent of time and effort to which his heavy restrictions and rules will cause in the long run. Stafford seems to neglect the statements claimed by Roberts Miller in the way that his argument for such heavy restrictions will most certainly not be completed easily. As Roberts Miller sets up an ultimate ideal “online world” by outlining the rules of proper discourse, Stafford admits wanting to move towards this utopia but not completely. I find that Stafford is accurate in moving towards this and personally I support the idea that public debate is essential for the lives of anyone. In an alternate paper written by Clive Thompson, by the title “Public Thinking”, this thought is extended. Thompson claims that the Internet can “clarify our thinking”, and help “connections to take over”(Thompson, 51). Essentially, my claim is that there most certainly should be restrictions on what can and cannot be posted on the Internet but it should also be noted that these actions would not occur overnight, as ideal as this would be. As put forth by Sierra and Pearson & Porath above, trollers and bullies will do just about anything to attack/harass online goers. Generally, there will always be predators anywhere, but in my eyes as well as Stafford’s restrictions may be a movement to a safer environment for most.
            The Internet was created to be a source of information, research and exploration. With the changing times, and advancement of society, we have gained so many more uses from the World Wide Web. We have grown to become a generation that is technology-dependent, meaning that we as a people are spending more and more time behind a screen, whether it’s be a laptop or a smart phone.  However, unfortunately with more and more active users, trollers and cyber-bullies have become more of an issue. The debate over incivility and anonymity in the online world today will forever be an ongoing controversy between what should and should not be done. The Internet will continue to change and grow, as will the amount of Internet users. Incivility and anonymity come with their benefits and consequences, as does anything else in this world. However, to better help the greater good of the people and provide sorts of protection from predators such as trollers and bullies, it is essential that we begin to move towards both Roberts Millers and Stafford’s ideals of a safer society. These propositions for solutions to the problem can attack the issue in a way that can greatly reduce the number of people who fall victim to incivility and anonymity issues in the online world. 


Works Cited
Pearson, Christine, and Christine Porath. "The Price of Incivility." Harvard Business Review. Harvard Business Publishing, 01 Jan. 2013. Web. 1 May 2015.

Roberts-Miller, Patricia. "Democracy, Demagoguery, and Critical Rhetoric." Rhetoric & Public Affairs 8.3 (2005): 459-76.

Sierra, Kathy. "Why the Trolls Will Always Win." Wired.com. Conde Nast Digital, 08 Oct. 2014. Web. 1 May 2015.

Stafford, Andrew. "Who Are These Haters That Poison the Well of Our Discourse?" The Sydney Morning Herald [Sydney] 12 Apr. 2012: n. pag. Print.


           

           
           


Monday, May 4, 2015

Slightly Less Rough Draft

               Civility is a term that is coined to mean formal politeness or courtesy, and this can be applied in both behavior and speech.  Despite the fact that civility should be an inevitable manner that is taken on by everyone, it can be seen more and more that civility among people is becoming more and more of a rarity. The people of the world seem to have a fascination with the idea of calling each other out, whether it be morally correct or not. The fact of the matter is that the world is becoming a smaller and smaller place everyday. People make connections through social medias, Internet, and cell phones constantly. The Internet is a young technological invention, but is the most rapid growing and the most obsessive addiction of this generation. With the idea of blogging, posting, and sharing thoughts on the worldwide web, threats arise in the forms of trolling, cyber-bullying, and hate comments. These threats are arising due to incivility, rudeness and bad morals. Yet the “trollers” and “bullies” feel no remorse, because in the online world, it is so easy to fake an identity and hide behind a screen. Deception and manipulation push trolls and bullies to continue what they are doing, and hurting people just due to the fact that they know they cannot be caught. This causes an issue of concern for the public in regards to political incivility, and if nothing is done to debunk the problem it will continue to creep into the center of our discourse. Ultimately if this issue is not addressed additional consequences can arise and affect the public in other various ways.  In order to propose a solution to the question of how the trolling and cyber-bullying phenomenon can be lessened to a degree, or even stopped completely; several approaches have been brought to light.  Taking pieces from each solution can contribute to a new approach to the situation all together. In this paper, political incivility and anonymity in the world today are analyzed through many different pieces of work including videos, news articles, and journals. In an effort to argue further on the topic, I am motivated to present my position as well as propose a solution to this debate regarding incivility and anonymity in both the online and non-online worlds.
            As stated above, through thorough research on incivility in the online world I have been able to pick up on many different possible solutions to these problems. In order to better represent my assessment of what the greatest solution would be many different sources, articles, and journals aid me. However, first I would like to address what others have suggested to solve this problem. Andrew Stafford, a Brisbane-based author and Age contributor, states in his article, that he would “request genuine transparency of identity” to start. He claims that this may “help to elevate the tone of how we speak to each other, and provide at least some protection from an army of baiters, haters, and spivs”.  In a different article, The Price of Incivility by Christine Porath and Christine Pearson, it is made obvious that the price of incivility has risen to astonishing numbers, for example “98% [of workers] have reported experiencing uncivil behavior in the workplace”. Incivility comes in various forms like stated in “The Price of Incivility” by Christine Porath and Christine Pearson, yet can have lasting effects. It is pointed out that “12% have left their jobs due to uncivil treatment”, “80% lost work time worrying about the incident”, and “63% lost work time voiding the offender”.  Continuing on this idea, another theory regarding trollers utilized the analogy of Kool-Aid to describe the phenomena. Kathy Sierra, a victim of an online troller, puts it as a victim being the “Kool-aid server” who has people “take” (as in retweet, favorite, expand upon), and this causes the troller to get angered that the audience gravitates towards your (the victims) “Kool-aid” rather than theirs. Mostly turning the situation into a popularity debate amongst everyone, however the only way that trollers believe they can “win” is through torment and harassment in various forms or however they see fit. After looking at what others have said, now I can take this to expand on my position in the overall topic of incivility and issues with discourse.
            In my assessment